Luke's paper:
1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, clear up traffic on 140th
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, city needs to make changes or open up the gate
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Yes, city can make changes
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
yes, it's a current topic that affects a lot of people
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
yeah, problem, cause, solution
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
yes
7. Is the writing clear?
yes, it's very straight forward


Augustine's paper:
1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, don't try to change dont ask dont tell policy
2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
yes, he wants to keep it the same
3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Yes, to try and change the policy
4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
yeah, it's current and important
5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes, current policy, counter argument, why it should stay the same
6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes
7. Is the writing clear?
yes his position is clear and makes sense